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Six Sentence Sunday-#3

2/19/2012

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My Six Sentence Sunday comes from my paranormal romance novel Spiritus.  This is a continuation from last week.  Becca has just woken up in her room with the feeling that she is not alone.

I sat up in bed and listened.  Someone was very close in the dark room, close enough to set off my intuition, but far enough away to be able to hide in the shadows.
           
Out of the corner of my eye I spotted movement. I froze, moving only my eyes to see a man standing in the dark corner across from the bed.
             
He was young, in his early twenties, just standing there staring at me.  His blue eyes were almost glowing in the dim light.

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Stephanie link
2/19/2012 12:36:47 am

Hmm, friend or foe? You do a great job of capturing that odd feeling of knowing someone is near. Thanks for sharing!

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Sandy Nachlinger link
2/19/2012 04:36:10 am

Yikes! Scary. You did a good job of creating tension in this scene.

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liz link
2/19/2012 06:37:26 am

I'm equal parts creeped out and intrigued! Good job!

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Cindy Carroll link
2/19/2012 02:53:45 pm

Great 6. Intriguing and spooky.

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Gayle Ramage link
2/21/2012 09:17:07 am

Ah, but is he friend or foe? Great six!

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